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As Emily walked around enjoying the breathtaking forest, the birds chirping away, patches of sunlight shining through. Emily was in a great mood. She neared around a corner, and saw a stallion, grazing away on the grass. Shockingly he didn't notice her, so she took this time to watch him. He was a very handsome stallion, a brown dun. She thought to herself, "maybe I can woo him into coming with me" she smiled to herself, challenge accepted. She put her tail slightly up and slowly but yet gracefully, towards the stallion. He finally noticed her and stares at her as she gets closer. He watched her carefully, Incase this was a trap, but when she got close, she stopped and stretched her neck out to sniff him. He did the same, she started to move closer, and work he head down his neck, sniffing.
Suddenly he shyly moved backwards, the mare gazed at him in awe, giving him a slightly confused look. She lowered her head, and softly spoke "my name is Emily" she kept her head low waiting for his response. "Earn my name" he said, that's different, earn my name? She thought to herself a bit taken by that, she sighed to herself, "how should I do that mister?" She said, at this point she looked into his eyes, such a rich shade of brown. She liked the color, and wanted to know more about him, 'but why' she asked herself. Because she was falling for the unknown stallion she has come across. He snorted to get her attention, which succeeded, "follow me" he stated and started to walk away. Not wanting him to get away she trotted up and after him, staying close to the handsome stallion. He lead her around the forest, landing them near a water area. He stopped and looked back to see if Emily had kept up and which she did, when he stopped she came up to him, now standing next to him she looked around. Why has she never noticed this being here? "This is quite beautiful" she said, looking up at him, she noticed he was staring back at her. How long has he been? She suddenly felt nervous and looked away, and trotted towards the water. He watched her, she splashed around in it, like she's never once touched water before. He was still watching her. She looked up at him, "come join me?" He smiled, she loved seeing a smile, mainly because she did something good. He nodded and jumped in, scaring Emily partly she moved quickly out of the way. The splash of the water connected with her face and she laughed. Raising one of her hooves she plopped it into the water, making the splash go towards him. It also hit his face, making her laugh even more, but then she heard something, him chuckling. He was also laughing! Filled with happiness she and him splashed around in the water together for what seemed like hours.
The sun was finally starting to set, Emily was laying in the sun drying herself off, while he was close to her but not to close. That sadden Emily a bit, but she understood why, he didn't know her nor did she know him. But yet they still had fun together. Does this mean she should ask him to stay with her? She started to panic, what if he says no? She looked at him, he was sleeping, she slowly inched her way near him. Taking in a much closer look at his face, he had a little tiny snip on his muzzle. That was adorable, she smiled lightly, she then nudged his cheek. His head bolted up, ears back, and about to get up, but then he realized it was just her. He calmed himself down, and looked at her, "yes?" He said, she was scared, terrified even, she opened her mouth but nothing came out. Shocking herself, she forced the words out, "w-will y-you come" she stopped, why was she stuttering to much? He was still looking at her, he smiled and nuzzled her head. "I'll think about it Emily" he said, huh?! She looked up at him. "Does that mean you knew what I was gonna say?" She said, "I'm going to say, you were going to ask me to stay with you" she blushed slightly and hide her head down, and muttered a yes. He chuckled again, she loved hearing that. That damn chuckle.
He slowly started to stand up, and walk towards the grass, and started grazing. “Can I ask you something?” She said, laying her head down on the ground. “Mm?” He said, as he kept eating away, “why did you bring me here?” She questioned, she hoped he knew what she meant, he looked up at her. “My mother used to bring me here, and tell me, when I find a beautiful mare. To bring her back here, to show her something not even as beautiful as herself.” He looked up at the sky, the stars are starting to appear and the dark blue sky. “She sounds like a nice mare” Emily said, she wanted to ask where she was, or if she was even still alive. But she didn't want to push her luck on this stallion. “Mister-” she started to say, “-thank you”
“You're welcome, beautiful.”

And with that said, the start night filled with smiles, they made jokes, and played together some more. Emily, praying that this stallion will accept her invitation to join her. While he, himself contemplates what he is going to do? Whether he stays with this mare he has now given his heart to or to walk away from the mare. He watches her carefully, as if she was a newborn foal, he was in a mental war with himself. She could tell it was by his eyes, and how sometimes he would stare off into nowhere for a few minutes. This made Emily worry, but she was glad she made a friend but also a possible lover. She wants that. But does he? She and him take a nap together under a tree, him pushed up against the tree while she is a bit away. She dreamt of his answer, for if he stayed or won't. The next morning she eagerly awaited his answer.
Lead Horse : fav.me/dbjew7x
Claimable Horse : sleipnir-admins.deviantart.com…
Bonus : N/A

Lead Horse : fav.me/dbjew7x
Activity : Claiming Attempt
Featuring : sleipnir-admins.deviantart.com… - Claimable Stallion # 127
Current Kingdom : Holt
Bonus: N/A

Word-count : 1060

Let's see if Emily won him.
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CLAIM ATTEMPT

After some thought, and a few hours sleep, come morn the stallion would give you his answer. While he thought you were a nice mare, he wasn't.. quite ready to commit. He leaves you with a score of 769.
Try again for bumped odds of 200/1000?